Lost In My Own World

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Characters
Adam -(Joe Jonas)
Claire -(Demi Lovato)
Scott Parker -(Jamie Bell)
General John Heart- (Cam Gigandet)

Part 1
"Chirp Chirp" I heard outside my tent as I slowly opened my eyes.I looked around at my things as I sat up,rubbing my eyes.I got out of my sleeping bag and rolled it up,sticking it in the corner.I unzipped the tent covering my eyes as I stepped out,I stood up and Stretched as I said "It's a great day for taking pictures".I went over to the green box I had sitting under
the long white table,I grabbed some bacon,eggs and coffee and the small portable stove.I set them all on the table,I opened the stove
grabbed the lighter out of the box and held it to the burner until I saw the small blue flame appear.I let the flame burn for a few minutes,as I grabbed the coffee pot and water jug from the box.I made my coffee and set the pot on the burner,As it was warming I went back to the tent
to pack all my things,while I was finishing I heard the crunching of branches at the back of the tent.I peaked through the little window and saw three monkeys playing in a tree, I Smiled and grabbed my camera turning it on before I stepped out.I walked slowly over to them "Hey....",I was interrupted by the sound of the Coffee pot whistling.I turned off my camera running over to the stove,I turned the burner off and sighed "So much for a good picture".I turn the burner back on and started my breakfast,I cooked and ate fast,by the time I finished I washed the plate and silverware along with the coffee pot and everything else I used that morning,I packed it back in the box,and stuffed it in the back.I then started to take down the tent,I took it down fast looking at my watch,seeing that it was already Twelve I attacked it to my bag,checked my campsite and headed out.As I was walking I came upon a trail, The trail was more like a road, "definitely something made by man ".I stood looking at the trail debating to follow it.But as I did my phone rang,I took it out of my pocket rolling my eyes as I looked at the caller ID."Hello" I said with a calm voice "Do you have those pictures yet" the voice said on the other line "Almost Mr.Anderson,I'm taking the last few now"."Oh" he said with a disappointed tone" "Look sir,I'll have the pictures for you by tomorrow"I said a bit annoyed "Good,I will see you tomorrow then,Bye" "Bye Mr.Anderson".I clicked the end button and continued looking at the trail.I took a few steps and stopped suddenly
"What was that".

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part 2-
I looked left then right "nothing" and then I turned around and looked and then turned around again "what was that sounds" and then I heard it again,but this time I knew that it
was right behind me.I stood still for a minute hearing the sound of a door squeaking and then "..I'll be back in a few" I heard someone say.I knew if I didn't move soon someone
would see me,so I ran towards the nearest group of bushes and trees and dove into them.I sat still for a few moments listening and waiting but everything was quit "Wow..that was
close one" I whispered to myself "Yeah,that was sure a close one..." someone said reaching their hand in through the bushes and yanking me out .A man maybe in his early 30s who
was maybe a few inches taller and stronger was holding onto me by the collar of my shirt just looking at me,and right beside him was another man maybe around my ago who was
standing there with a serious face and a pistol to my head.The man who had my collar finally let me go but soon grabbed me again "Your on our property so you are now ours"
the man said tieing by hands behind my back "Wonderful..." I said sarcastically. The man with the gun back away and with a almost mad voice said "I am Scott Parker head guard"
I looked over at him for a minute "Head guard of what..The Jungle" I started to laugh "NO!! Head guard the NSA" "NSA...What is that..The National Stupid Administration"
John glared down at me waving his hand and signaling his partner to go "No,The NSA stand for the National Security Administration" I couldn't help but laugh his accent..
was to funny "Well...if your going to laugh about important matters..we'll see how you like being locked up..lets say..FORTHERESTOFYOURLIFE" Once again I couldn't
help but laugh "Yes..I would like some pie..but Cherry..gosh what is wrong with you..I want some peach pie" "That's it..no more nice guy" I stood looking at him and before I knew
it his fist was coming right for me,but I was tied up so there was little I could do about it,so I braced for the hit and fell straight to the ground "I hope you like dirt because..because
that's all you get for a few days" I stayed on the ground with the dirt on my face & I feel my nose start to bleed "Yeah......this really seems like a Security Administration..." Scott then
grabbed me by the collar once again and dragged me to the NRA wall which was covered in bushes and trees to keep it hidden,He then threw me up against it & I was out

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